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3/11/2008 c1 7Pearls and Formaldehyde
Deep. Apparently I'm not the only one mildly interested in English class. I like this. It's sad, but it's good.

"Her husband before

And her daughter behind."

That really choked me up!

Great Work!

P.&F.
3/4/2008 c1 1FellowMan
Being Jewish, I have a special place in my heart for writing devoted to exposing that monster that is: holocaust. It should never be forgotten, and I found your poem quite moving, however there was one typo "her lasts moments" you mean "last moments" right?-anyways :) good job
3/4/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
really powerful piece... and the title is beautiful... the idea of humming is an interesting juxtaposition and well done

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