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6/3/2008 c3 21Faith Adeline
Hmm, this was okay. I feel like it should be a longer-novel length story, rather than in three parts, simply because some parts feel rushed. So, maybe you could work this into a longer novel? May be a good idea. Otherwise, it was good.

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5/1/2008 c2 Faith Adeline
I liked it. Keep it up and update soon :)

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3/5/2008 c1 Faith Adeline
Techincally, she would've been dismissed off the case anyways. But, I like where this is going. I would suggest slowing down, don't show us too many things too soon. Keep it up and update soon!

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