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12/29/2011 c19 Reader
from chapter 1 to 19...it feels like this story was written out to satisfy your urge to write...poor constructed plot and lots of wrong grammar...
But still, I will continue to read for proper comment once finished reading it.
from chapter 1 to 19...it feels like this story was written out to satisfy your urge to write...poor constructed plot and lots of wrong grammar...
But still, I will continue to read for proper comment once finished reading it.
12/11/2011 c7 love the story
So sweet when he called her his butterfly- never heard of that term of endearment and absolutely loved it!
So sweet when he called her his butterfly- never heard of that term of endearment and absolutely loved it!
12/11/2011 c3 love the story
That was a original and unique idea about the shooting range...loved it! Good way to get out your frustrations out too :)
That was a original and unique idea about the shooting range...loved it! Good way to get out your frustrations out too :)
12/11/2011 c47 love the story
I absolutely love the story, but next time might want to add more about how they love each other other than sex. In the story, it seemed like he just liked her for sex, but then you saw at the end of the story where he married her so then the readers read that is was more than sex. Fantastic story and very original!
I absolutely love the story, but next time might want to add more about how they love each other other than sex. In the story, it seemed like he just liked her for sex, but then you saw at the end of the story where he married her so then the readers read that is was more than sex. Fantastic story and very original!
11/17/2010 c47 
7Elyssa Morales
OKAY. THIS IS A SHIT STORY. I MEAN WHAT KIND OF LESSON ARE YOU TRYING TO TEACH PEOPLE? REPORTING THIS.
7Elyssa MoralesOKAY. THIS IS A SHIT STORY. I MEAN WHAT KIND OF LESSON ARE YOU TRYING TO TEACH PEOPLE? REPORTING THIS.
12/24/2009 c47 Winona
I LOVED IT! But was kind of awkward to read snce my dads name is Mark
I LOVED IT! But was kind of awkward to read snce my dads name is Mark
12/22/2009 c47 7Writing Reality
WHOA!
FREAKING LOVE IT!
SEQUAL! PLEASE! :D
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Padmai -Hidden Assassin-
7Writing RealityWHOA!
FREAKING LOVE IT!
SEQUAL! PLEASE! :D
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Padmai -Hidden Assassin-
12/20/2009 c47 Dragonwryn
Whew...Wow I love this story it is fantabulastic! Definitly will read it over and over again XD Love your work
Whew...Wow I love this story it is fantabulastic! Definitly will read it over and over again XD Love your work
12/14/2009 c47 3DarkGoddess3
Even though it was wrong what she did you couldn't help really liking her. That had to be really hard to do as a writer because I believe it was very wrong but I still liked them and the story a lot. I still really like Josh too he was never really the bad guy cuz he was just to sweet to be.
Even though it was wrong what she did you couldn't help really liking her. That had to be really hard to do as a writer because I believe it was very wrong but I still liked them and the story a lot. I still really like Josh too he was never really the bad guy cuz he was just to sweet to be.