for The Death in the Widower8/9/2008 c1 Isca
"Beautiful princess of calamity." Amazing line!
"Sleep." The only comfort a widow can find. That is very profound :D
"Beautiful princess of calamity." Amazing line!
"Sleep." The only comfort a widow can find. That is very profound :D
4/17/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I liked this. The title was really interesting and the piece was just as intriguing. I love the ending... those last two lines were absolutely perfect. It's very sad and well done. The only thing I might say is you end it with a period even though the whole piece is missing punctuation. I would either get rid of it all or add the rest in. Other than that it's really well done.
612simpleplan13I liked this. The title was really interesting and the piece was just as intriguing. I love the ending... those last two lines were absolutely perfect. It's very sad and well done. The only thing I might say is you end it with a period even though the whole piece is missing punctuation. I would either get rid of it all or add the rest in. Other than that it's really well done.
3/25/2008 c1 vault of glass
This speaks a lot for the incredible pain of loss and grief. I am really impressed.
You're a great poet!
P.S. Thank you so much for your sweet responses! :D
This speaks a lot for the incredible pain of loss and grief. I am really impressed.
You're a great poet!
P.S. Thank you so much for your sweet responses! :D
3/25/2008 c1 82Billie.Joelle
Wow. this was really good. it was so descriptive! i loved it, you portrayed the emotions really well, everything was just very well written. nice job.
~BJ
82Billie.JoelleWow. this was really good. it was so descriptive! i loved it, you portrayed the emotions really well, everything was just very well written. nice job.
~BJ