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8/9/2008 c1 Isca
"Beautiful princess of calamity." Amazing line!

"Sleep." The only comfort a widow can find. That is very profound :D
4/17/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I liked this. The title was really interesting and the piece was just as intriguing. I love the ending... those last two lines were absolutely perfect. It's very sad and well done. The only thing I might say is you end it with a period even though the whole piece is missing punctuation. I would either get rid of it all or add the rest in. Other than that it's really well done.
4/4/2008 c1 19SomethingNifty
This was sad, but I enjoyed reading it.

~SomethingNifty
3/25/2008 c1 vault of glass
This speaks a lot for the incredible pain of loss and grief. I am really impressed.

You're a great poet!

P.S. Thank you so much for your sweet responses! :D
3/25/2008 c1 82Billie.Joelle
Wow. this was really good. it was so descriptive! i loved it, you portrayed the emotions really well, everything was just very well written. nice job.

~BJ

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