for Heart Mind Soul7/24/2008 c1 
1Tsukimiko
I like how you've done this one, it could have been better in my poion, but to change anything or even make it longer or shorter, seems to cleanse whatever feeling was there before. Don't worry I can still feel it even now.
1TsukimikoI like how you've done this one, it could have been better in my poion, but to change anything or even make it longer or shorter, seems to cleanse whatever feeling was there before. Don't worry I can still feel it even now.
4/11/2008 c1 9iChellezm
I really liked how you wrote this poem. The wording was done nicely. I love how Heart Mind and Soul are in lines all by themselves. Keep writing!
9iChellezmI really liked how you wrote this poem. The wording was done nicely. I love how Heart Mind and Soul are in lines all by themselves. Keep writing!
3/24/2008 c1 3Disenchanted Light
Beautiful! I especially love how you emphasize "heart", "mind" and "soul" with the lines with three powerful words that contradict each other. Not to mention, they are some of the most important aspects in one's life.
-D.L. XD
3Disenchanted LightBeautiful! I especially love how you emphasize "heart", "mind" and "soul" with the lines with three powerful words that contradict each other. Not to mention, they are some of the most important aspects in one's life.
-D.L. XD