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3/6/2008 c1 ibmc2146
What's your justification for the center aligning and no punctuation?

'your bad' ? do you mean you're (you are) here?

I'm sorry but, your poem is really broken up and really confusing in the format that it's in(center align no punctuation). It's all like one big run on sentence that never ends, and I didn't feel compelled to read it at all. To add to the list, the double spacing and the fact that it's not separated into stanzas doesn't do anything for you.

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