for doubts3/8/2008 c1 
28friend 49
I think this is a really beautiful poem.
There's one line though, "To bring you back/ And let you hope ring the bells"
I'm not sure if you mean to let your hope ring the bells or what. :)
Overall, very nice poem...
I like this a lot and I'm looking forward to more!
28friend 49I think this is a really beautiful poem.
There's one line though, "To bring you back/ And let you hope ring the bells"
I'm not sure if you mean to let your hope ring the bells or what. :)
Overall, very nice poem...
I like this a lot and I'm looking forward to more!
3/7/2008 c1 fleur de l'est
All the blessings that we lose count every time we try... They're all his help. Well structured, love it =)
All the blessings that we lose count every time we try... They're all his help. Well structured, love it =)