for Winter Fortitude3/11/2008 c1 
224Ryan Schiff
This is really a great haiku. I don't know how I feel about the middle line but I really like the idea and the first and last lines are both just great.
224Ryan SchiffThis is really a great haiku. I don't know how I feel about the middle line but I really like the idea and the first and last lines are both just great.
3/8/2008 c1 ygg
Wow such marvelous imagery! The last line is striking in its concretion, which makes the reader wonder and ponder. Excellent Haiku!
Wow such marvelous imagery! The last line is striking in its concretion, which makes the reader wonder and ponder. Excellent Haiku!