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3/16/2008 c1 322Basara
yet sorrows and scars are the very existent thing that we live...

nice...
3/11/2008 c1 224Ryan Schiff
This is really a great haiku. I don't know how I feel about the middle line but I really like the idea and the first and last lines are both just great.
3/8/2008 c1 216ygg
Wow such marvelous imagery! The last line is striking in its concretion, which makes the reader wonder and ponder. Excellent Haiku!
3/8/2008 c1 174a silenced revolution
Nice imagery, not quite sure I understand it.

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