for Stop Snowing3/9/2008 c1 simpleplan13
Hey... i just reviewed you but I forgot to mention If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile)
Hey... i just reviewed you but I forgot to mention If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile)
3/9/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I love all your descriptions of snow.. especially the part about gingerbread houses and how it changes in the end was really great and I love the last three lines they're so funny and true.. one thing you say its complete silence, but sounds are muffled, which isnt silence really... muffled sounds are still there just muffled... but other than that it's a really great piece
612simpleplan13I love all your descriptions of snow.. especially the part about gingerbread houses and how it changes in the end was really great and I love the last three lines they're so funny and true.. one thing you say its complete silence, but sounds are muffled, which isnt silence really... muffled sounds are still there just muffled... but other than that it's a really great piece
3/7/2008 c1 donxcat
your point really comes across forcefully. Not exactly a work of art but shows your real feelings. You love the snow but are fed up with this winter.
your point really comes across forcefully. Not exactly a work of art but shows your real feelings. You love the snow but are fed up with this winter.