for Playing House9/14/2012 c1 Guest
You have a great way of making a story come alive.
You have a great way of making a story come alive.
2/15/2009 c1 
2chasing givenchy
Heh, the title gave quite a bit away (and "sock" also, but only in retrospect,) but I love the soap opera touch on every line. You're right, Brooke and Ridge (Eric? maybe) couldn't have done better, and it's ironic how I'm reading this seconds after reading this interview with the guy who plays Ridge and his real-life guitar. (Homg, that soap was murderous.)
My favourite part was how well "build some and break some" ties in neatly with what the "workplace" really is, lol.
2chasing givenchyHeh, the title gave quite a bit away (and "sock" also, but only in retrospect,) but I love the soap opera touch on every line. You're right, Brooke and Ridge (Eric? maybe) couldn't have done better, and it's ironic how I'm reading this seconds after reading this interview with the guy who plays Ridge and his real-life guitar. (Homg, that soap was murderous.)
My favourite part was how well "build some and break some" ties in neatly with what the "workplace" really is, lol.
4/7/2008 c1 62Oracle of Destiny
LOL I found this very funny xD Great job with it and I liked the surprise at the end :)
62Oracle of DestinyLOL I found this very funny xD Great job with it and I liked the surprise at the end :)
3/25/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
Cute piece. It was quite realistic. It definitely made me laugh. Nice work. Have a lovely day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrCute piece. It was quite realistic. It definitely made me laugh. Nice work. Have a lovely day.
~Twilight Starr~
3/22/2008 c1 22groovacious
Major twist much? That was hilarious-I really did think it was about a bunch of grown lads "playing house." Well done-there was only one grammar error but overall, a great read.
22groovaciousMajor twist much? That was hilarious-I really did think it was about a bunch of grown lads "playing house." Well done-there was only one grammar error but overall, a great read.
3/7/2008 c1 Tutty Fruity
Haha! Cute (:
Haha! Cute (: