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for jesus's late night promise

3/8/2008 c1 fleur de l'est
Hi, thanks for the review! I love this poem, especially the way you wrote it from the point of view of Jesus. I don't know about other people, but I like being able to feel the presence of Jesus around me. This is quite heart warming. It kind of rhymes (I like poems that rhyme lol) but the last two "right"'s kind of repeat each other, so it could be improved. Other than that, I enjoyed the piece thoroughly! And by the way I liked the randomness dripping off your profile. XD I have some random work as well if you want to check them out =P

recap: WELL DONE!

-fleur

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