Reviews: poem to a girlfriend

7/6/2008 c1

10TwilightButterfly
The ending made me laugh. It started out on such a deep note, but then ended with that playful corniness that so many girls find humorous. Thanks for sharing.

3/8/2008 c1

47Adenil
You wrote this without a girlfriend at the time? Wow, it still feels inspired. It's nice, though the last line leaves somthing to be deisired.