Just In
for Winter Adventure

3/8/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
Eyes tight shut.. tightly

I like this... the descriptions are really great... I like the beginning especially... it's a great description of the cold... two things though.. in one part you call the sled a toboggan, which I think is something different... also I think it needs a bit more punctuation in there...

Anyhow it's still a really great piece... almost as if you are sledding too

PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile)

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service