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3/10/2008 c1 216ygg
I can relate to that feeling.. Love the use of "titan tree"; it gives the whole poem a higher density, which fits very well with the connotations of "groggy". Good work!
3/9/2008 c1 123454321
'titan tree'? I'm not really sure what you were trying to say here, but maybe you should try a different adjective.

The rest of this piece flows very well. Your use of the word 'groggy' is very good in relation of where you are going with it.


Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).
3/9/2008 c1 59Tranquil Thorns
That must be one massive headache. =P

Anyway, I like how you put the pain into words. 'The weight of a titan tree' is a strong line. I like that description.

Feel better!

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