
3/10/2008 c1
216ygg
Quite intriguing analogy! Love the symbolism behind the images you convey. Good work!

Quite intriguing analogy! Love the symbolism behind the images you convey. Good work!
3/10/2008 c1
10LyricsArePoetry
This is great!
ONe problem though, the first line has 6 sylabells (I'm aware that is spelt wrong, but you get what I mean right?). Otherwise it's sweet!

This is great!
ONe problem though, the first line has 6 sylabells (I'm aware that is spelt wrong, but you get what I mean right?). Otherwise it's sweet!