for The Call Speaks for Itself3/10/2008 c1 
460Time To Change
I absolutely love the imagery in the first verse and the line "Charcoal cries bounce clear". Sometimes I think you need more elaboration, and with your one word lines I think you need to use punctuation to express why they are set alone.
460Time To ChangeI absolutely love the imagery in the first verse and the line "Charcoal cries bounce clear". Sometimes I think you need more elaboration, and with your one word lines I think you need to use punctuation to express why they are set alone.