for Six Shots Till Sundown7/14/2008 c1 James Nelms
I like the premise of this, though it could have done with being a bit longer towards the end - I think it just sounds a tad rushed there. Other than that, I thought it was pretty darn cool
I like the premise of this, though it could have done with being a bit longer towards the end - I think it just sounds a tad rushed there. Other than that, I thought it was pretty darn cool
3/25/2008 c1 
24Kathleen Fitzgerald
An amusing idea, but it's extremely bare.
Needs more description, depth and feeling.
Feels like little effort was put into this.
Not necessarily bad, but not necessarily good.
24Kathleen FitzgeraldAn amusing idea, but it's extremely bare.
Needs more description, depth and feeling.
Feels like little effort was put into this.
Not necessarily bad, but not necessarily good.