for Faen's Brutality5/28/2008 c1 
8Kar-zid
Awesome story, very sad and unexpected ending! The kids all died then, some were eaten and others fell to their death. I wonder where the monster came from, but of course some things are better left unexplained. ^_^
8Kar-zidAwesome story, very sad and unexpected ending! The kids all died then, some were eaten and others fell to their death. I wonder where the monster came from, but of course some things are better left unexplained. ^_^
3/13/2008 c1 9Otseis Ragnarok
Onar - Review Game.
Well, you're damned if you do, and you're damned if you don't...
That's pretty much the vibe I'm getting here.
A few things struck me as odd, though...
1). The monster was in the corner at the beginning, right? Well, halfway through, it was in the doorway... but you never mentioned it moving...
2). The principal. She seemed a bit maniacal... I think this was all her doing...
3). it wasn't that scary... Kinda creepy, but I did laugh at a few moments...
9Otseis RagnarokOnar - Review Game.
Well, you're damned if you do, and you're damned if you don't...
That's pretty much the vibe I'm getting here.
A few things struck me as odd, though...
1). The monster was in the corner at the beginning, right? Well, halfway through, it was in the doorway... but you never mentioned it moving...
2). The principal. She seemed a bit maniacal... I think this was all her doing...
3). it wasn't that scary... Kinda creepy, but I did laugh at a few moments...