for Cue the Serenade2/4/2010 c1 Icyfire4w5
Haha, I appreciate this vignette because of its twist. By the way, I've experienced something similar in a shopping mall before. Gah, I'm prejudiced against men who sway their hips while walking-they look like women!
Haha, I appreciate this vignette because of its twist. By the way, I've experienced something similar in a shopping mall before. Gah, I'm prejudiced against men who sway their hips while walking-they look like women!
1/25/2009 c1 
2CiaoMonAmi
Oh man. lol. See this is why I don't like guys that have long hair! It so easy to confuse them from the behind...haha :)
Good job. I love it.
I love how you used "you" I thought it gave it a moral personal touch. :)
2CiaoMonAmiOh man. lol. See this is why I don't like guys that have long hair! It so easy to confuse them from the behind...haha :)
Good job. I love it.
I love how you used "you" I thought it gave it a moral personal touch. :)
11/15/2008 c1 esmeralda
lol, that was great. Short and sweet, brilliant.
lol, that was great. Short and sweet, brilliant.
5/25/2008 c1 4Imalefty
straight from the review marathon! (link in profile)
ahahaha, that was so funny. XD it was totally unexpected... i definitely thought you were talking about a girl. XD
it was weird, though, how you used "you" to talk about the man. i can see where it was necessary, but... still. i think you could have used "she" and it would have been okay. at the end, maybe it could have been "she was a he." or something. XD
anyway, good job. keep writing!
-Lefty
4Imaleftystraight from the review marathon! (link in profile)
ahahaha, that was so funny. XD it was totally unexpected... i definitely thought you were talking about a girl. XD
it was weird, though, how you used "you" to talk about the man. i can see where it was necessary, but... still. i think you could have used "she" and it would have been okay. at the end, maybe it could have been "she was a he." or something. XD
anyway, good job. keep writing!
-Lefty