3/15/2008 c1 28me. moi. ich
i love it, but the only thing that i can think of that could possibly make it better is to make the end of the poem connect more to the rest of everything- i know you repeated the last 4 lines, but the whole idea of the rose being around the dead and the sick just seems like a rather stark contrast with everything else. if you didnt intend for it to be like that, then i would suggest tying everything together a bit more. good work though!