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4/11/2008 c1 13Shasta Valentine

geautiful execution, amazing imagery,. great metaphors,

i do believe this will go under my fav stories list!

3/15/2008 c1 28me. moi. ich
i love it, but the only thing that i can think of that could possibly make it better is to make the end of the poem connect more to the rest of everything- i know you repeated the last 4 lines, but the whole idea of the rose being around the dead and the sick just seems like a rather stark contrast with everything else. if you didnt intend for it to be like that, then i would suggest tying everything together a bit more. good work though!

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