for The Cookie Chronicles:The Life of a Cookie5/9/2008 c1 dinodaw
why did you have to make it so SAD? At first i liked it but then sniff it got so sad sniff Why? sniff why?
dinodaw
why did you have to make it so SAD? At first i liked it but then sniff it got so sad sniff Why? sniff why?
dinodaw
3/18/2008 c1 
1Demon Tales
Intresting story. It began as a humorous tale, but quickly became a tragedy. I would have liked a continuation, but there would truely be no point. It's a good story, none the less!
Peace ~Demon Tales
1Demon TalesIntresting story. It began as a humorous tale, but quickly became a tragedy. I would have liked a continuation, but there would truely be no point. It's a good story, none the less!
Peace ~Demon Tales
3/17/2008 c1 R.J.Warren
Hmm, a new outlook on life definately (i can't spell). Kinda sad though, but the first two paragraphs made me laugh
Hmm, a new outlook on life definately (i can't spell). Kinda sad though, but the first two paragraphs made me laugh
3/17/2008 c1 8R.E.D. the animator
The first two paragraphs were funny, but the later ones (and epeacialy the last one) were sad. Now I'm all sad. It feels like a part of my soul is now deader. (Yes I am so sad that I'm using improper English!) Nice going! Now my day is ruined!
Just kidding! But still... sad.
8R.E.D. the animatorThe first two paragraphs were funny, but the later ones (and epeacialy the last one) were sad. Now I'm all sad. It feels like a part of my soul is now deader. (Yes I am so sad that I'm using improper English!) Nice going! Now my day is ruined!
Just kidding! But still... sad.
3/16/2008 c1 2Double AA
And this is why cookies actualy don't have souls. There is no point! You made the story longer than when I first read it, I suppose that's a bonus. Is this the end? Or will there be more?
Keep Writing!
Double A
2Double AAAnd this is why cookies actualy don't have souls. There is no point! You made the story longer than when I first read it, I suppose that's a bonus. Is this the end? Or will there be more?
Keep Writing!
Double A
3/15/2008 c1 71Bob Evans
What I want to know is why the teeth didn't kill it immediately. And, if not them, then why not the stomach? I'm a little disturbed thinking that my cookies are still alive when I got to the bathroom to do my business. Ew!
~Bob Evans
71Bob EvansWhat I want to know is why the teeth didn't kill it immediately. And, if not them, then why not the stomach? I'm a little disturbed thinking that my cookies are still alive when I got to the bathroom to do my business. Ew!
~Bob Evans
3/15/2008 c1 59Tranquil Thorns
Wow! That ancient two-day-old cookie sure can endure a lot.
But of course, being a cookie is a lot better than being a blueberry muffin (what a nightmare!) Hehe. This story made me giggle, needless to say.
Thanks for that!
59Tranquil ThornsWow! That ancient two-day-old cookie sure can endure a lot.
But of course, being a cookie is a lot better than being a blueberry muffin (what a nightmare!) Hehe. This story made me giggle, needless to say.
Thanks for that!
3/15/2008 c1 6Ms. Critic
My first story! It's exciting, but kind of sad the only thought that came to me was a living cookie.
6Ms. CriticMy first story! It's exciting, but kind of sad the only thought that came to me was a living cookie.
3/15/2008 c1 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
A cookie with a soul? That is an interesting concept. I liked it, but can tell you can do better. (I know that's hard to here, but if you re-worked this story a little I KNOW is would be awesome!)
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
A cookie with a soul? That is an interesting concept. I liked it, but can tell you can do better. (I know that's hard to here, but if you re-worked this story a little I KNOW is would be awesome!)
Write on!
Pen.Dragon