for The Eternal Bond9/19/2008 c9 midnighters
W-O-W
you have the soul for writting :)
hope you post the next chapter soon!
W-O-W
you have the soul for writting :)
hope you post the next chapter soon!
7/21/2008 c7 Olivia C
You have a good plot for the story, but I think it needs to be developed a little more, and the way you word certain sentences is a bit odd. But I really do enjoy the story, but proof read. And please try to make the story a bit longer.
You have a good plot for the story, but I think it needs to be developed a little more, and the way you word certain sentences is a bit odd. But I really do enjoy the story, but proof read. And please try to make the story a bit longer.
6/6/2008 c5 
1DarkestOfNights
Wow this guy is extremely straight forward and stalkerish like but I like the story please continue writing it, I'm dieing to know what will happen.
1DarkestOfNightsWow this guy is extremely straight forward and stalkerish like but I like the story please continue writing it, I'm dieing to know what will happen.
4/17/2008 c6 2pinkdottedlily
Seriously you are pure evil! I hate short chapters but b/c it's so short I hope you'll update soon-pretty please! I can't wait to find out more...evil evil Liarden!
2pinkdottedlilySeriously you are pure evil! I hate short chapters but b/c it's so short I hope you'll update soon-pretty please! I can't wait to find out more...evil evil Liarden!
4/16/2008 c3 obsessive reader
i havent read it all yet but so far i am lovin it. i love the chemistry between lyra and liarden. he's a vampire isnt he? post some more soon
i havent read it all yet but so far i am lovin it. i love the chemistry between lyra and liarden. he's a vampire isnt he? post some more soon
4/10/2008 c4 taa2s
i like this story.. when is an update coming up? its been a month since the last one!
i like this story.. when is an update coming up? its been a month since the last one!
3/23/2008 c5 pinkdottedlily
Ok well I don't know how many reviews you have but you need to continue this! Please...here's a hint-put it onto under books and then vampires. It'll get way more reviews b/c people who go there are only looking for vampire stories and not all "supernatural" stories-trust me I have like 50 some reviews there for a story I posted there vs. the one review I only got here. And most of my other stories have over 150 reviews! Trust me it works and this story is really good! Please update soon!
Ok well I don't know how many reviews you have but you need to continue this! Please...here's a hint-put it onto under books and then vampires. It'll get way more reviews b/c people who go there are only looking for vampire stories and not all "supernatural" stories-trust me I have like 50 some reviews there for a story I posted there vs. the one review I only got here. And most of my other stories have over 150 reviews! Trust me it works and this story is really good! Please update soon!