
3/16/2008 c1
4Sasha Williams
I liked this, it was well written and I think that's probably the most important thing. It was a little confusing, though, I didn't know entirely what was happening at the end. Was she miscarrying or giving birth, or was the devil attacking? Anyway, I'm impressed with your work.

I liked this, it was well written and I think that's probably the most important thing. It was a little confusing, though, I didn't know entirely what was happening at the end. Was she miscarrying or giving birth, or was the devil attacking? Anyway, I'm impressed with your work.