for The Art of Kissing Properly9/11/2010 c15 Emerald Dragon77
Aww! I feel bad for Jon. I really like your story; I just wish you had decided to continue with it. However, I know how hard it can be to finish a story (I'm guilty). Anyway, good luck with your future writing endeavors.
Aww! I feel bad for Jon. I really like your story; I just wish you had decided to continue with it. However, I know how hard it can be to finish a story (I'm guilty). Anyway, good luck with your future writing endeavors.
11/5/2008 c15 
3Abstruse Blue
I liked how this chapter turned out and yeah I just read the whole thing now. I really started to like Aiden too and do, I feel bad for Jonathan of course but sometimes you have to go along with your heart and gut feeling. Otherwise you are just lying to yourself if you ignore it, not a good feeling. I really like it and hope you continue soon!
3Abstruse BlueI liked how this chapter turned out and yeah I just read the whole thing now. I really started to like Aiden too and do, I feel bad for Jonathan of course but sometimes you have to go along with your heart and gut feeling. Otherwise you are just lying to yourself if you ignore it, not a good feeling. I really like it and hope you continue soon!
11/4/2008 c15 aripie
im a bit confused cuz i really like jonathan :L but ce la vie - Ad definitely needs to something to compare him too HAHAHAHA ...haha hehe
im a bit confused cuz i really like jonathan :L but ce la vie - Ad definitely needs to something to compare him too HAHAHAHA ...haha hehe
11/3/2008 c1 166openmouthblues
Hrm. I've read up to chapter six, but I don't have time to read the rest.
I'll review and read more later, but I wanted you to know that I'm subscribing to this story! It's pretty good, so far. I like the style, and a lot of your lines are quoteable, because they're so funny.
-Ice
166openmouthbluesHrm. I've read up to chapter six, but I don't have time to read the rest.
I'll review and read more later, but I wanted you to know that I'm subscribing to this story! It's pretty good, so far. I like the style, and a lot of your lines are quoteable, because they're so funny.
-Ice
8/31/2008 c1 8Dotyky
I really like this! Your writing style is different but I like it, you introduce the characters well.
8DotykyI really like this! Your writing style is different but I like it, you introduce the characters well.
8/19/2008 c15 1Kneecap
Ding-dong, the bitch is gone.
HA JONATHAN! HA! TAKE THAT! Oh I feel overjoyed! Yis!
I can't really think of much else to say other than that! It seems you're quite good at emotive scenes :D.
1KneecapDing-dong, the bitch is gone.
HA JONATHAN! HA! TAKE THAT! Oh I feel overjoyed! Yis!
I can't really think of much else to say other than that! It seems you're quite good at emotive scenes :D.
8/11/2008 c15 knits alot
I love the chapter titles.. lol. Adele doesn't know how good he had it with Jonathon. I know he is young, but I can't help feeling he is making a big mistake. I know it's romantic, but I don't feel like kissing and waiting for the feelings tells you whether you love someone or not. Love is not logical, but there is some thinking involved, not just feelings. If Adele hadn't been through so much already, if his emotions weren't so raw, I think he'd understand that.
I love the chapter titles.. lol. Adele doesn't know how good he had it with Jonathon. I know he is young, but I can't help feeling he is making a big mistake. I know it's romantic, but I don't feel like kissing and waiting for the feelings tells you whether you love someone or not. Love is not logical, but there is some thinking involved, not just feelings. If Adele hadn't been through so much already, if his emotions weren't so raw, I think he'd understand that.
8/9/2008 c15 Roman Candles
I like it so far. The characters are true to life and the plot is coming along nicely. Please update soon.
I like it so far. The characters are true to life and the plot is coming along nicely. Please update soon.
8/7/2008 c15 10zomgnessa
aww poor jonathan
i dont know who im for now =[
ugh, i wish it could work out where he could have both of them
10zomgnessaaww poor jonathan
i dont know who im for now =[
ugh, i wish it could work out where he could have both of them
8/7/2008 c15 3Ty Taco
I'm like...totally crying for Johnathan.
He realize he just threw away his relationship for a fling right?
I mean...when are him and Aiden ever going to see each other again?
After this vacation...
I mean...seriously.
Love your story...but...c'mon.
xoxoxoxox,
Ty
3Ty TacoI'm like...totally crying for Johnathan.
He realize he just threw away his relationship for a fling right?
I mean...when are him and Aiden ever going to see each other again?
After this vacation...
I mean...seriously.
Love your story...but...c'mon.
xoxoxoxox,
Ty
8/7/2008 c15 3Nicholas Scott
You know I was just practically jumping up and down when Aiden and Addison kissed. I was ecstatic. THen Ad has to go and talk to Jonathan, and I didn't want that conversation to happen. I suddenly felt sorry for Jonathan, but I didn't want to feel sorry for him. which of course just goes to show how wonderful you wrote that scene. It was lovely and flawless and I just loved it. Now I just have to wait for more. Still wonderfully beautiful. kissy noises
3Nicholas ScottYou know I was just practically jumping up and down when Aiden and Addison kissed. I was ecstatic. THen Ad has to go and talk to Jonathan, and I didn't want that conversation to happen. I suddenly felt sorry for Jonathan, but I didn't want to feel sorry for him. which of course just goes to show how wonderful you wrote that scene. It was lovely and flawless and I just loved it. Now I just have to wait for more. Still wonderfully beautiful. kissy noises
8/6/2008 c15 teethandlungs
Oh...no...;-; that's now how I was hoping it'd go.
SIGH.
What happens when they all leave to go back to school, huh?
Nicely written chapter, nonetheless. Good job :)
Oh...no...;-; that's now how I was hoping it'd go.
SIGH.
What happens when they all leave to go back to school, huh?
Nicely written chapter, nonetheless. Good job :)
8/2/2008 c14 teethandlungs
I honestly don't know what is wrong with me for the simple reason as to why I didn't pick up this story so much earlier. I just don't know why I didn't. ...I digress. I'm glad that you've written it, it's certainly entertaining. You've got a style that seems half-way between blunt fact and beautiful detail and I quite dig it. :) Please write more.
I honestly don't know what is wrong with me for the simple reason as to why I didn't pick up this story so much earlier. I just don't know why I didn't. ...I digress. I'm glad that you've written it, it's certainly entertaining. You've got a style that seems half-way between blunt fact and beautiful detail and I quite dig it. :) Please write more.