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7/4/2008 c1 10TwilightButterfly
The title sucked me in, and the last line left me smiling. Leave it up to Joseph to start what looks like an emo poem and then turn it to the love of God. Very suave.
3/18/2008 c1 15BWeep
Gotta thank you. You reminded me of God. =)

Just a suggestion, you may want to consider capitalizing all pronouns and nouns referring to Him.

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