for Beauty and the Vampire3/28/2008 c5 The Banshee's Tears
very nice story so far. its beautiful! great job and i cant wait to read more of it! :)
very nice story so far. its beautiful! great job and i cant wait to read more of it! :)
3/18/2008 c4 
3Dragon Queen23
This story seems very promising. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Xoxo Dragon Queen23
3Dragon Queen23This story seems very promising. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Xoxo Dragon Queen23
3/18/2008 c3 3Seraph-of-Nightsong
interesting start :) One thing I noticed in the beginning of this chapter... "She bit her lip as she descended up the stairs." You can't "descend" "up" haha. Ascend means to go up. Descend means to go down :):)
best of luck!
3Seraph-of-Nightsonginteresting start :) One thing I noticed in the beginning of this chapter... "She bit her lip as she descended up the stairs." You can't "descend" "up" haha. Ascend means to go up. Descend means to go down :):)
best of luck!