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5/24/2009 c1 2dragonflydreamer
I love the flow of this. It's so fluid and free, just like the feeling that the words are describing. It really helped me get into the mood of the piece.

[lands of mist/Below which spread]

I didn't particularly like the stanze break there. It felt like an awkard place to take such a long pause.

Beautiful piece overall :)

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
3/19/2008 c1 6sooner or later its over
i loved your phrase "across this landscape, we drift"

brilliant keep writting =]

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