for My Love Flows5/24/2009 c1 
2dragonflydreamer
I love the flow of this. It's so fluid and free, just like the feeling that the words are describing. It really helped me get into the mood of the piece.
[lands of mist/Below which spread]
I didn't particularly like the stanze break there. It felt like an awkard place to take such a long pause.
Beautiful piece overall :)
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
2dragonflydreamerI love the flow of this. It's so fluid and free, just like the feeling that the words are describing. It really helped me get into the mood of the piece.
[lands of mist/Below which spread]
I didn't particularly like the stanze break there. It felt like an awkard place to take such a long pause.
Beautiful piece overall :)
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
3/19/2008 c1 6sooner or later its over
i loved your phrase "across this landscape, we drift"
brilliant keep writting =]
6sooner or later its overi loved your phrase "across this landscape, we drift"
brilliant keep writting =]