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for The Last Time at the Water's Edge

6/19/2008 c1 2meiilove
this is so good :D

i usually dislike poems, but this is one good one x)
3/20/2008 c1 59Tranquil Thorns
Creepy, and a little depressing.

Nice imagery, especially 'Haunting, pale skin; dry cracked lips'. I thought the line 'Shadows begin to cast' could be reworded, though. The word 'cast' seems a little awkwardly placed. It should be easy enough to replace, though, if you wanted to. =P

Nice work.

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