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4/11/2008 c1 13Shasta Valentine
although your rhyming was beautiful, it was also a little strecthed if you get what i'm saying

a whole other attitude was set before a word connected with it's initial.

also this poem is sweet, i do think the second half is much more desirable than the first half.

but i can tell your a good poet, keep writing!


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