for She Should Have7/2/2008 c1 
28woodstock1969
Wow. That's a very good cautionary tale. I actually know a guy who should read it. He's kind of a hermit - puts his success above all else and doesn't really have a life. In that sense, this is a very relatable story. Well done!
28woodstock1969Wow. That's a very good cautionary tale. I actually know a guy who should read it. He's kind of a hermit - puts his success above all else and doesn't really have a life. In that sense, this is a very relatable story. Well done!
3/21/2008 c1 2simplicity is complex
this is a little cofusing.
high school - stream into class?
college - diploma to university?
deborah, if you want to reference to the american high school system... yeah.
other than that, pretty okay.
2simplicity is complexthis is a little cofusing.
high school - stream into class?
college - diploma to university?
deborah, if you want to reference to the american high school system... yeah.
other than that, pretty okay.
3/21/2008 c1 2codeblue92
ah, meaningful story(: spotted some errors though. but nevertheless, it's good(: okay I need to mug now, bye! and be honoured. HAHA.(:
2codeblue92ah, meaningful story(: spotted some errors though. but nevertheless, it's good(: okay I need to mug now, bye! and be honoured. HAHA.(: