for Vampire Rose Academy6/15/2011 c3 
2Mmm Donut Seeds
It sounds interesting, but I don't think I'm actually going to read it past this chapter because it's not interesting reading about the past when you're presenting it as such. I'd rather read about what's currently going on in the world you've created.
2Mmm Donut SeedsIt sounds interesting, but I don't think I'm actually going to read it past this chapter because it's not interesting reading about the past when you're presenting it as such. I'd rather read about what's currently going on in the world you've created.
2/12/2011 c1 Inuyashals gf kagome
Hi! I dont think that eating tigers and eagles is nice cuz they are some of my fav. Animals so i advice u dont say sumthin like that again and by the way, good goin with ur story.
Hi! I dont think that eating tigers and eagles is nice cuz they are some of my fav. Animals so i advice u dont say sumthin like that again and by the way, good goin with ur story.
11/23/2010 c6 Rochelle
OMG! I really like this story can you please write more. I need to know what happens next and who she gets with. Please write more soon. Shelly x
OMG! I really like this story can you please write more. I need to know what happens next and who she gets with. Please write more soon. Shelly x
8/12/2010 c1 ano
sounds intresting.is it a movie,show,cartoon,or an anime? if it is a written story i think it should be one of the above. it is a really good story...
sounds intresting.is it a movie,show,cartoon,or an anime? if it is a written story i think it should be one of the above. it is a really good story...
1/17/2010 c6 tyker
this is really good, update soon plz
this is really good, update soon plz
12/21/2009 c6 2Mae Liz
Interesting story. Other than the grammatical errors I don't have anything negative. Watch your tense shifts, and your homonyms. A Beta would fix that quite easily, but it doesn't detract from the story enough that it becomes a problem when following the story.
I actually like this idea, the theme of the story is refreshing from the usual story lines involving a girl and vampires (even though this girl is also a vampire). It is refreshing. It isn't the idea of the girl falling for the vampire on sight. I would be very interested in seeing what you have in store for the quartet as the story progresses.
2Mae LizInteresting story. Other than the grammatical errors I don't have anything negative. Watch your tense shifts, and your homonyms. A Beta would fix that quite easily, but it doesn't detract from the story enough that it becomes a problem when following the story.
I actually like this idea, the theme of the story is refreshing from the usual story lines involving a girl and vampires (even though this girl is also a vampire). It is refreshing. It isn't the idea of the girl falling for the vampire on sight. I would be very interested in seeing what you have in store for the quartet as the story progresses.
12/12/2009 c6 1Ash Sterling
I didn't like it, I didn't hate it. I LOVED IT! Your an awesome author cheerful, and I enjoy reading your work.
I'd like to give some advice to you. You know how when you read someone else's stories you notice their little typos? Before you post a document, whether it's a story or a blog, and see what little things you can catch on your own. It can be fun, sometimes you can make the simplest little goofs that when you find them again they make you laugh.
I just wanted to give that tip, hope to see the next chapter soon!
1Ash SterlingI didn't like it, I didn't hate it. I LOVED IT! Your an awesome author cheerful, and I enjoy reading your work.
I'd like to give some advice to you. You know how when you read someone else's stories you notice their little typos? Before you post a document, whether it's a story or a blog, and see what little things you can catch on your own. It can be fun, sometimes you can make the simplest little goofs that when you find them again they make you laugh.
I just wanted to give that tip, hope to see the next chapter soon!
9/30/2009 c6 tyker
this is the best story ever, im really impressed by you. good job.
this is the best story ever, im really impressed by you. good job.
9/30/2009 c1 tyker
awesome
awesome
4/5/2009 c5 3Freddy Teddy
I would like to hear from lucifer. but who could she fall for? they're all pretty bad. Lucifer seems the best of the three.
3Freddy TeddyI would like to hear from lucifer. but who could she fall for? they're all pretty bad. Lucifer seems the best of the three.
2/18/2009 c5 1Ash Sterling
You so should stick to your schedule with Lucius. I think it would be interesting to hear his side of the story.:)
1Ash SterlingYou so should stick to your schedule with Lucius. I think it would be interesting to hear his side of the story.:)