
3/22/2008 c1
59Tranquil Thorns
What I like here is the strength of the female character, Beth.
I don't think I caught mention of tears or crying or some other kind of breakdown. Actually, all I felt here was anger, irritation and resolve.
The last line drove it home. Good job here!

What I like here is the strength of the female character, Beth.
I don't think I caught mention of tears or crying or some other kind of breakdown. Actually, all I felt here was anger, irritation and resolve.
The last line drove it home. Good job here!