
2/16/2009 c1 huh
Now this was a good story. I liked the characters right off the bat. It was a bit more 'cute' than your current story. And I don't mean that in any way negatively, different styles of writing are definately a good thing. You don't wanna be predictable. I enjoyed it very much. I look foreward to reading more of your stories when I have more time.
Now this was a good story. I liked the characters right off the bat. It was a bit more 'cute' than your current story. And I don't mean that in any way negatively, different styles of writing are definately a good thing. You don't wanna be predictable. I enjoyed it very much. I look foreward to reading more of your stories when I have more time.
2/9/2009 c1 Vicky A
Sweet story. I really enjoyed it.
Sweet story. I really enjoyed it.
2/9/2009 c1
10Aurora Corona
Ahaha, totally cute in a rather random way. :D I wonder what would've happened if the owner of the phone was a seventy year old grandpa! xD

Ahaha, totally cute in a rather random way. :D I wonder what would've happened if the owner of the phone was a seventy year old grandpa! xD
1/24/2009 c1 sarcasm is my middle name
OMG! That's the funniest plot i've ever read!
Great story, please update!
OMG! That's the funniest plot i've ever read!
Great story, please update!
1/11/2009 c1 xoxo1
ah, love it!
it's short and cute.
-sighs- i wish something equally cheesy as this could happen to me... xD
ah, love it!
it's short and cute.
-sighs- i wish something equally cheesy as this could happen to me... xD
1/8/2009 c1 ATellerOfTales
That is adorable. I like this a lot. You should write more stuff like this.
That is adorable. I like this a lot. You should write more stuff like this.
1/5/2009 c1 notyourbiz
oh my god this was ridiculously funny it probably wouldn't happen but it is an awesome story! loved it !
oh my god this was ridiculously funny it probably wouldn't happen but it is an awesome story! loved it !
12/30/2008 c1 Its Mrs. Pink Floyd again
JUST SO YOU KNOW,
I nominated this for BEST ONE SHOT at the SKOW awards, along with Nobodys Fault But Mine as BEST CLICHE!
I don't know if other people have voted or anything, BUT YOU HAVE MY VOTES if it works out
:)
your favorite reader,
Mrs. Pink Floyd
JUST SO YOU KNOW,
I nominated this for BEST ONE SHOT at the SKOW awards, along with Nobodys Fault But Mine as BEST CLICHE!
I don't know if other people have voted or anything, BUT YOU HAVE MY VOTES if it works out
:)
your favorite reader,
Mrs. Pink Floyd
12/19/2008 c1 prince
Aw..! Cheesy..
Aw..! Cheesy..