for Babysitting Dramas3/24/2008 c3 
7iWander
I really like the voice in this! It's kind of childish, VERY rebellious and so spunky that it's infectious. ( yes, it rhymed, I get it) I adore the mental conversations, and the lighthearted manner and flow of the piece is addicting. I really wish there was more back story, but c'est la vie. I'll live. You need to keep this up. Seriously. MR
7iWanderI really like the voice in this! It's kind of childish, VERY rebellious and so spunky that it's infectious. ( yes, it rhymed, I get it) I adore the mental conversations, and the lighthearted manner and flow of the piece is addicting. I really wish there was more back story, but c'est la vie. I'll live. You need to keep this up. Seriously. MR
3/24/2008 c2 LovesToDance
The jerks in town! He sounds Hot, H-O-T, Hot! lol
I see the tension between them...this is going to be a very funny/interesting story to read!
Update soon!
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The jerks in town! He sounds Hot, H-O-T, Hot! lol
I see the tension between them...this is going to be a very funny/interesting story to read!
Update soon!
xx
3/24/2008 c1 LovesToDance
That was a cute chappie!
The title really suits the chapter, I love Eden! She seems so out there!
Great chapter!
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That was a cute chappie!
The title really suits the chapter, I love Eden! She seems so out there!
Great chapter!
xx
3/23/2008 c2 1Jevanminx
Hehehehehehe I cant believe he did that. Its made me go all girly and squealy. Cant wait for an update.
JM
1JevanminxHehehehehehe I cant believe he did that. Its made me go all girly and squealy. Cant wait for an update.
JM
3/23/2008 c2 6Jaina-Skylar
YAY! 'Nother chappie! Well... at least you're more dedicated than I am... *looks around nervously* hehe... well... can't wait for more, you're going a really good job! I LOVE THE FUNNY! YAY! *happy dance*
dude... I really gotta lay off the sugar... :P
6Jaina-SkylarYAY! 'Nother chappie! Well... at least you're more dedicated than I am... *looks around nervously* hehe... well... can't wait for more, you're going a really good job! I LOVE THE FUNNY! YAY! *happy dance*
dude... I really gotta lay off the sugar... :P
3/22/2008 c1 6Jaina-Skylar
Wow... this is good, and funny at the same time! Way to go, can't wait for more!
6Jaina-SkylarWow... this is good, and funny at the same time! Way to go, can't wait for more!
3/22/2008 c1 1shelivesinafairytale
Uuh, I think I'm the first one to review!
Anyway... loved it!
Please, update soon, I had so much fun with the first chapter, can't wait for the others ;D
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1shelivesinafairytaleUuh, I think I'm the first one to review!
Anyway... loved it!
Please, update soon, I had so much fun with the first chapter, can't wait for the others ;D
xx