
4/15/2008 c1
8S.J.Olusanya
Cool introduction, it feels a little like MGS3 Snake Eater and I'm into this govt agency stuff, I feel this story deserves at least a review for the first chapter and hope you continue writing more.

Cool introduction, it feels a little like MGS3 Snake Eater and I'm into this govt agency stuff, I feel this story deserves at least a review for the first chapter and hope you continue writing more.