for Stones in Eleusis5/26/2008 c1 
59Tranquil Thorns
I love mythology, and your narration is excellent.
I love the way you built Demeter's character. She is not just a 'figure' in mythology here, but someone who could be believed in and seen as a creature with voice and emotions.
Wonderfully written - I could find no complaints. The one typo I noticed is only a minor spacing error: 'Her low and amused tone curls like a forked tongue and changes to one/ of rage'. Those two paragraphs should be connected, shouldn't they?
In any case, I enjoyed this reading.
59Tranquil ThornsI love mythology, and your narration is excellent.
I love the way you built Demeter's character. She is not just a 'figure' in mythology here, but someone who could be believed in and seen as a creature with voice and emotions.
Wonderfully written - I could find no complaints. The one typo I noticed is only a minor spacing error: 'Her low and amused tone curls like a forked tongue and changes to one/ of rage'. Those two paragraphs should be connected, shouldn't they?
In any case, I enjoyed this reading.