
4/9/2009 c1
32Rambina
I found your first paragraph very profound and insightful, I could imagine it being at the start of a very long essay about our quest for knowledge and how we hunger for it even though it will probably be our downfall.
Your last paragraph, on human emotion, perplexed me a bit, as I had originally thought it was about knowledge, but I see now, that bringing new topics enriched your piece of writing immensely.
I thought your writing as a whole, was very good, and was surprised no-one had commented on your ability to express your thoughts in such a philosophical manner.

I found your first paragraph very profound and insightful, I could imagine it being at the start of a very long essay about our quest for knowledge and how we hunger for it even though it will probably be our downfall.
Your last paragraph, on human emotion, perplexed me a bit, as I had originally thought it was about knowledge, but I see now, that bringing new topics enriched your piece of writing immensely.
I thought your writing as a whole, was very good, and was surprised no-one had commented on your ability to express your thoughts in such a philosophical manner.