4/2/2008 c1 495mate.feed.kill.repeat
LOVED IT. =]

I've read a lot of Alice In Wonderland related poetry in the past few weeks, and although I don't really like the movie/story (kind of creeps me out), I must say the poetry is pretty trippy awesome.

I really liked this because of the rhythm and the way you took a world that a lot of people are familiar with and you flipped it upside down. The ending was amazing. The beginning really got me hooked and the short lines made a really cool rhythm. Great job.

-stix-

3/25/2008 c1 989East-0f-Eden
Brilliant I love poems that use Alice in Wonderland. It's really quite brilliant.