for Elective Occupation3/27/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
The alliteration in this piece is absolutely amazing. I also like the format with the parenthesis a lot. I like how morbid the sea shells sound in the second stanza. That was really interesting. But I was especially astounded by all the s words.. they were really well chosen.
612simpleplan13The alliteration in this piece is absolutely amazing. I also like the format with the parenthesis a lot. I like how morbid the sea shells sound in the second stanza. That was really interesting. But I was especially astounded by all the s words.. they were really well chosen.