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3/27/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
The alliteration in this piece is absolutely amazing. I also like the format with the parenthesis a lot. I like how morbid the sea shells sound in the second stanza. That was really interesting. But I was especially astounded by all the s words.. they were really well chosen.

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