
3/30/2008 c1
3Paradise L
Thanks for the review. I'm new to fp, and I appreciate that you stopped by to review whatever I had on my page. Anyways, normally I'm not too into rhyme because it is more difficult to express exact emotions since there is a limited pool of words from which you can choose from (someone told me this before). However, I am really impressed with this piece even though there is rhyme. I like it :D

Thanks for the review. I'm new to fp, and I appreciate that you stopped by to review whatever I had on my page. Anyways, normally I'm not too into rhyme because it is more difficult to express exact emotions since there is a limited pool of words from which you can choose from (someone told me this before). However, I am really impressed with this piece even though there is rhyme. I like it :D