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3/26/2008 c1 1FellowMan
hehheh, I can see wee pirates singing this, and it not being cheesy, but quite piratefantastic
3/26/2008 c1 59Tranquil Thorns
Yay for sailing!

Ahem. =P I thought this was very nicely written, and the first line pulled me right in. I love the way you phrased it - 'stop not for sunset'.

One line that confused me a little, however, was 'Still air is not time for play.' What did you mean by 'still air'? One without wind or a breeze to guide the ship? Maybe it was just the way I read it that puzzled me.

Anywho, great poem!

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