for La Butte and the Blood11/11/2008 c6 
5RebeccaAlice
OMG, Cédric reminds me of you so much.
I like him, he sounds cool. Hope more chapters are written from his POV.
5RebeccaAliceOMG, Cédric reminds me of you so much.
I like him, he sounds cool. Hope more chapters are written from his POV.
10/13/2008 c5 RebeccaAlice
I like this.
I like Nino, he makes me laugh.
Is Cédric cool?
I hope he's cool, he has a cool name XD
Anywho, yes, love it, update soon!
I like this.
I like Nino, he makes me laugh.
Is Cédric cool?
I hope he's cool, he has a cool name XD
Anywho, yes, love it, update soon!
10/11/2008 c2 sooner or later its over
"...smell of urine in the air. Great, he'd pissed himself. I suddenly lost my appetite."
that was really funny, well not funny how the guy dies, but funny.
the attack was well written. Usually writers wouldn't add something like self urination into the story because they wouldn't think of it. but i think it would be (for some people) a natural reaction when they're terrified and i think adding that in made your story very realistic. good job :)
"...smell of urine in the air. Great, he'd pissed himself. I suddenly lost my appetite."
that was really funny, well not funny how the guy dies, but funny.
the attack was well written. Usually writers wouldn't add something like self urination into the story because they wouldn't think of it. but i think it would be (for some people) a natural reaction when they're terrified and i think adding that in made your story very realistic. good job :)
10/11/2008 c1 sooner or later its over
::chuckles::
i loved the line : "...Oh, and I couldn't catch nasty things like syphilis, either."
it was really subtle but hilarious, none the less
good job :)
::chuckles::
i loved the line : "...Oh, and I couldn't catch nasty things like syphilis, either."
it was really subtle but hilarious, none the less
good job :)
4/24/2008 c4 Bazooka Joy
Reading this, I thought the whole thing was a part of the authors note XD
But yeah...wondering who this new character is.
Reading this, I thought the whole thing was a part of the authors note XD
But yeah...wondering who this new character is.
4/24/2008 c3 1Finnyh
Wow. More Joshwa! More!
"Yeah...unless you're into kinky stuff. Then it's two hundred."
I loved that line. I didn't know you had it in you to write.
Good turn of events. :)
1FinnyhWow. More Joshwa! More!
"Yeah...unless you're into kinky stuff. Then it's two hundred."
I loved that line. I didn't know you had it in you to write.
Good turn of events. :)
4/24/2008 c2 Finnyh
Hey you. I have no idea what your guy (whose name I can't actually remember or spell :D) looks like. *Proddage*.
Hey you. I have no idea what your guy (whose name I can't actually remember or spell :D) looks like. *Proddage*.
4/24/2008 c1 Finnyh
:| Bad Joshwa! 'Special skills?' what does that mean! I r reading. And I'm only the other side of the room. *Sinks into the floor* BWAR.
:| Bad Joshwa! 'Special skills?' what does that mean! I r reading. And I'm only the other side of the room. *Sinks into the floor* BWAR.
4/22/2008 c3 Bazooka Joy
Oh wow, nice how he kills another vampire just liek that like it's nothing.
PS. I really like your writing style.
Oh wow, nice how he kills another vampire just liek that like it's nothing.
PS. I really like your writing style.
3/26/2008 c2 Bazooka Joy
Josh, don't forget to double space between dialogue. Makes it easier to read. Other than that there's nothin wrong with this chapter. Keep up the good work!
Josh, don't forget to double space between dialogue. Makes it easier to read. Other than that there's nothin wrong with this chapter. Keep up the good work!
3/26/2008 c1 Monster-ish
You spelled "sacre coeur" 2 different ways in the fourth paragraph. And Holly=Holy? But other than that this is pretty good. A story taking place in France, o. Will you be putting any French words and phrases in there?
You spelled "sacre coeur" 2 different ways in the fourth paragraph. And Holly=Holy? But other than that this is pretty good. A story taking place in France, o. Will you be putting any French words and phrases in there?
3/26/2008 c1 Bazooka Joy
I never really thought about vampires getting diseases from the humans they take blood from...but anyway, all I'm wondering is what Monsieur Lucien Laîque wants him for. I guess I'll see.
I never really thought about vampires getting diseases from the humans they take blood from...but anyway, all I'm wondering is what Monsieur Lucien Laîque wants him for. I guess I'll see.