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5Uisukiiinyoursleep
I read this story years ago, and stumbled upon it again today- I can't believe I never reviewed it! This story reminds me of an anime, 'Ghost Hunt', that I really enjoyed. I love the characters, the pacing, and the happenings feel well-researched (as much as it can be for supernatural occurrences ;-). I'd love to see you continue it; I find Charlie and Parker extremely sympathetic as characters, and am intrigued by the ghost story in Cronholm's building.
5UisukiiinyoursleepI read this story years ago, and stumbled upon it again today- I can't believe I never reviewed it! This story reminds me of an anime, 'Ghost Hunt', that I really enjoyed. I love the characters, the pacing, and the happenings feel well-researched (as much as it can be for supernatural occurrences ;-). I'd love to see you continue it; I find Charlie and Parker extremely sympathetic as characters, and am intrigued by the ghost story in Cronholm's building.
1/1/2013 c5 7gulistala
Hi I know this is 3 years late but just wondering if you're thinking of still updating this fic or has it been abandoned? It's really interesting and I'd love to know more! My theory- victor killed the woman and then he killed Noah because he was a witness.
7gulistalaHi I know this is 3 years late but just wondering if you're thinking of still updating this fic or has it been abandoned? It's really interesting and I'd love to know more! My theory- victor killed the woman and then he killed Noah because he was a witness.
11/11/2009 c5 megan
I just found this story and I love the twist!
I just found this story and I love the twist!
10/27/2009 c5 8WithoutException
YAY! It's back. :)
Good chapter. I don't know if I'm creeped out yet, necessarily, but it is certainly intriguing.
8WithoutExceptionYAY! It's back. :)
Good chapter. I don't know if I'm creeped out yet, necessarily, but it is certainly intriguing.
10/27/2009 c5 3Quixoticisms
Hello
I like how your chapters are long and eventful. And of course the heart-ache-y tension between Charlie and Parker 8D
Please update soon! I'm looking forward to more tension, haha. (And naturally the plot, too)
PS: Thank you for not taking your story off fictionpress (like many other writers have done). Your story's one of the few good ones left here that I can look forward to; so thank you very much 8)
3QuixoticismsHello
I like how your chapters are long and eventful. And of course the heart-ache-y tension between Charlie and Parker 8D
Please update soon! I'm looking forward to more tension, haha. (And naturally the plot, too)
PS: Thank you for not taking your story off fictionpress (like many other writers have done). Your story's one of the few good ones left here that I can look forward to; so thank you very much 8)
9/11/2009 c4 Kaiyu Onibaba
I love it! Characters, humor, writing style... and yes, it's creepy! Especially since I'm reading this alone at night! haha Great story! Update soon!
I love it! Characters, humor, writing style... and yes, it's creepy! Especially since I'm reading this alone at night! haha Great story! Update soon!
7/30/2009 c4 8WithoutException
Ah! I remember seeing "All Dogs Go to Heaven," but if you'd asked me about it, I probably couldn't remember anything. But just then, reading that quote, triggered some weird memory.
Well, anyway, on to the point of this review:
Wow, this is really well written! And I really enjoy the dynamic/chemistry between all of the team members on here. I think Parker is my favorite, though.
I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews! It seems like you haven't updated it in awhile either...I hope you're not abandoning it! Seriously, this is one of the first stories I've read on FictionPress that I can actually imagine being a real, published book.
8WithoutExceptionAh! I remember seeing "All Dogs Go to Heaven," but if you'd asked me about it, I probably couldn't remember anything. But just then, reading that quote, triggered some weird memory.
Well, anyway, on to the point of this review:
Wow, this is really well written! And I really enjoy the dynamic/chemistry between all of the team members on here. I think Parker is my favorite, though.
I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews! It seems like you haven't updated it in awhile either...I hope you're not abandoning it! Seriously, this is one of the first stories I've read on FictionPress that I can actually imagine being a real, published book.
4/5/2009 c4 44EyesthatMesmerize
Hey-
I'm realyl enjoyign this story. The characters are great-very distinct from eachother and developed well that they all stand as individuals.
I can't wait to read the next chapt.
Goodluck,
-Sam :D
44EyesthatMesmerizeHey-
I'm realyl enjoyign this story. The characters are great-very distinct from eachother and developed well that they all stand as individuals.
I can't wait to read the next chapt.
Goodluck,
-Sam :D
12/28/2008 c4 fairy Eva
I really really like this story. I hope you're planning on updating, because I'd love to see where this is going. I love the Charlie-Parker awkwardness and love the supernatural-ness of it!
I really really like this story. I hope you're planning on updating, because I'd love to see where this is going. I love the Charlie-Parker awkwardness and love the supernatural-ness of it!
11/2/2008 c4 4DevonnyAuriel
Sorry this took me so long to respond. I was in Spokane and all, but Tay's at a meeting, thus I have a minute to read it.
I like it! I'm excited for a certain somebody (Who I know the name of but I'm not sure if it's been said in the story yet so I won't say his name) to appear. Ohh it shall be excitin'! I think fictionpress took away your line breaks, though. (It's been doing that to my stories too, so now it's not just you.) Maybe put in a "-" or something.
You'll have to tell me what story you're doing for NaNoWriMo. I'm going to start either tonight or tomorrow hopefully. I'm behind already with the trip to old Spokane. You know.
Anyhoo. great! Mucho love! Don't give up on it m'dear.
4DevonnyAurielSorry this took me so long to respond. I was in Spokane and all, but Tay's at a meeting, thus I have a minute to read it.
I like it! I'm excited for a certain somebody (Who I know the name of but I'm not sure if it's been said in the story yet so I won't say his name) to appear. Ohh it shall be excitin'! I think fictionpress took away your line breaks, though. (It's been doing that to my stories too, so now it's not just you.) Maybe put in a "-" or something.
You'll have to tell me what story you're doing for NaNoWriMo. I'm going to start either tonight or tomorrow hopefully. I'm behind already with the trip to old Spokane. You know.
Anyhoo. great! Mucho love! Don't give up on it m'dear.
11/1/2008 c4 21Faith Adeline
I liked it, loved the part with the radio. Very cool. Just be careful of your grammar, punctuation, things like that. I would consider getting a beta, just to look after those tiny details for you. They really help. Oh, and when time lapses, but in breaks, so the reader won't get confused. Just a tiny break, like maybe ... and skip down to another line and continue. Just so we know time has lapsed. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
21Faith AdelineI liked it, loved the part with the radio. Very cool. Just be careful of your grammar, punctuation, things like that. I would consider getting a beta, just to look after those tiny details for you. They really help. Oh, and when time lapses, but in breaks, so the reader won't get confused. Just a tiny break, like maybe ... and skip down to another line and continue. Just so we know time has lapsed. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
5/14/2008 c3 Cashaholic
haha... yay, another update! That was very entertaining, and the plot begins the thicken.. no?
x. Cashaholic
haha... yay, another update! That was very entertaining, and the plot begins the thicken.. no?
x. Cashaholic
5/13/2008 c3 4DevonnyAuriel
Ah Gubbins. Another swell chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It had action (an explosion of papers), romance, (such sweet, tender moments) humor (do I need an example?) and suspense. (Who in the world can Noah be?)
Except the last one isn't really that suspenseful to me because I know who he is...as you've told me...but if we DIDN'T exchange stories every day before biology then I wouldn't have a clue!
I like Parker. Parker reminds me of what I would like to be, if I were a man.
Who's HIPSTER RUNOFF?
I MUST KNOW.
...this doesn't fit your story at all. But shh.
4DevonnyAurielAh Gubbins. Another swell chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It had action (an explosion of papers), romance, (such sweet, tender moments) humor (do I need an example?) and suspense. (Who in the world can Noah be?)
Except the last one isn't really that suspenseful to me because I know who he is...as you've told me...but if we DIDN'T exchange stories every day before biology then I wouldn't have a clue!
I like Parker. Parker reminds me of what I would like to be, if I were a man.
Who's HIPSTER RUNOFF?
I MUST KNOW.
...this doesn't fit your story at all. But shh.
5/12/2008 c3 21Faith Adeline
I liked the chapter. I thought the diologue and detail was weighed together nicely, because you don't want too much of one and not enough of the other. You kind of have to balance them. I cracked up when I saw he came out in her bathrobe. Too funny! Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
21Faith AdelineI liked the chapter. I thought the diologue and detail was weighed together nicely, because you don't want too much of one and not enough of the other. You kind of have to balance them. I cracked up when I saw he came out in her bathrobe. Too funny! Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
4/16/2008 c2 Cashaholic
This is getting extremely interesting... haha. Cronhom is such a freak, no?
x. Cashaholic
This is getting extremely interesting... haha. Cronhom is such a freak, no?
x. Cashaholic