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3/28/2008 c1 1TheDarkMeadow98
eh its alright i think you should mix it up a little bit
3/27/2008 c1 62Oracle of Destiny
I really love this as it is very heart-felt and full of emotions like heartbreak. I can relate to this as I was in love with a male friend (when he had someone else already) and turned out that he didn't like me the way i liked it. So yeah, this has kinda a special meaning to me xD
3/27/2008 c1 35wildcard07
The flow of idea and the simplicity of words enable you to transmit the intended meaning to your readers.

A better arrangement and choice of words would have made this more...tasteful. :)

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