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4/29/2008 c1 4Eclipsia Soulbird
I love things written in the 2nd-person narrative. And you did it fantastically. Prose-like. Well done :) I especially like the line "You don't want to be that boyfriend or girlfriend who needs to know where your other half is every single moment of every single day but find yourself starting to be like that" - because I know people like that and simply can't stand them... Well I can, because they're my friends, but when they act like that it annoys me to no end.

... Then again, my relationships would probably last longer if I acted more like I cared...

Anyway, good work... Did I already say that?


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