for Walls9/25/2008 c1 
140Chidaruma Kamisori
I like this.
Makes me think of a first love or of finding the one person who makes you feel perfect right after you messed up so badly that the world is about to explode.
-C.K.
140Chidaruma KamisoriI like this.
Makes me think of a first love or of finding the one person who makes you feel perfect right after you messed up so badly that the world is about to explode.
-C.K.
8/19/2008 c1 588Setsuna529
I really like the image that this creates, of someone frantically trying to fix a crumbling wall. I think I know what that feels like. Another great haiku.
588Setsuna529I really like the image that this creates, of someone frantically trying to fix a crumbling wall. I think I know what that feels like. Another great haiku.
6/12/2008 c1 15miscellanea
What a cool concept! So many other thoughts were spawned from those small words the instant I read it.. Good job.
15miscellaneaWhat a cool concept! So many other thoughts were spawned from those small words the instant I read it.. Good job.
3/29/2008 c1 16right2reality
I really liked the fragility conveyed through this haiku. You've taken a simple image and made it touching and beautiful- good job! Anyways, keep up the good work!
-right2reality
16right2realityI really liked the fragility conveyed through this haiku. You've taken a simple image and made it touching and beautiful- good job! Anyways, keep up the good work!
-right2reality