for The Little Tear In My Skin12/21/2009 c1 
4HighOnBrokenWings
Ahh.
Very well portrayed.
I'm definately not going to judge. I cut for a bit. It was a hurt that I could control, thats why I did it to myself. Kind of defying my parents. "See you can hurt me, but never as much as I can hurt myself"
And nobody ever can understand, huh?
They DO talk about it like it's the stupidest thing you could do.
But it does make sense in your brain.
At the time.
This conveyed what I felt.
Amazing
4HighOnBrokenWingsAhh.
Very well portrayed.
I'm definately not going to judge. I cut for a bit. It was a hurt that I could control, thats why I did it to myself. Kind of defying my parents. "See you can hurt me, but never as much as I can hurt myself"
And nobody ever can understand, huh?
They DO talk about it like it's the stupidest thing you could do.
But it does make sense in your brain.
At the time.
This conveyed what I felt.
Amazing
6/3/2009 c1 10Elizabeth Arlen
Intense. I write as an outlet too and I've had a lot of problems with cutting myself. I'm not very good at poetry but I always find those who are very impressive. It was a great flow of emotions. I hope you're doing well and let the healing continue.
Also, thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Sorry it took me so long to reciprocate!
Lizzie Arlen
10Elizabeth ArlenIntense. I write as an outlet too and I've had a lot of problems with cutting myself. I'm not very good at poetry but I always find those who are very impressive. It was a great flow of emotions. I hope you're doing well and let the healing continue.
Also, thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Sorry it took me so long to reciprocate!
Lizzie Arlen
11/27/2008 c1 3Duuude
"I hate holding it all in, when it begs to be let out." I think that's what you meant, right? You forgot to put the "out" part.
And suicide is spelled with a "c".
I think it would work better if you put "how it helps the bigger one in my soul", instead of just big one.
This has a lot of emotion and I think it's an amazing poem actually. It does explain a lot.
Sometimes people don't consider other people's feeling. They like to bash things they don't understand.
"Look at this tear in my skin and see how it helps the big one in my soul." That's the best line in the poem. Don't forget to consider my advice on changing "big" to "bigger".
Nice poem. Very sad too. I hope you're feeling better about whatever it was that made you do this.
3Duuude"I hate holding it all in, when it begs to be let out." I think that's what you meant, right? You forgot to put the "out" part.
And suicide is spelled with a "c".
I think it would work better if you put "how it helps the bigger one in my soul", instead of just big one.
This has a lot of emotion and I think it's an amazing poem actually. It does explain a lot.
Sometimes people don't consider other people's feeling. They like to bash things they don't understand.
"Look at this tear in my skin and see how it helps the big one in my soul." That's the best line in the poem. Don't forget to consider my advice on changing "big" to "bigger".
Nice poem. Very sad too. I hope you're feeling better about whatever it was that made you do this.
4/18/2008 c1 10A Typical Aquarius
This poem is very true. What people see on the outside isn't always what the truth is. Great poem. Keep writing!
10A Typical AquariusThis poem is very true. What people see on the outside isn't always what the truth is. Great poem. Keep writing!
4/8/2008 c1 2CiaoMonAmi
Cheers! :)
I like how you pointed out that most people think cutting is just for attention, when it's more than that, ya know? And it's stupid not to keep an open mind, not that I cut. (Felt, I had to point that out.)
Keep writing!
Ciao,
H
2CiaoMonAmiCheers! :)
I like how you pointed out that most people think cutting is just for attention, when it's more than that, ya know? And it's stupid not to keep an open mind, not that I cut. (Felt, I had to point that out.)
Keep writing!
Ciao,
H