for Define Gay7/6/2008 c1 
5Rose Warne
It doesn't really matter whether or not there's going to be a new chapter. I'm waiting for one anyways!
Dang, this one scene is so powerful, I'd like to know what happens before and after it. You characterize them as these two average guys who have been acting tough for who knows how many years, and then bam, Nathan just threw them in one of the most awkward situations I've ever seen! Well, at least Joey thought of a way to make it less awkward.
Done very nicely. Be proud of yourself.
5Rose WarneIt doesn't really matter whether or not there's going to be a new chapter. I'm waiting for one anyways!
Dang, this one scene is so powerful, I'd like to know what happens before and after it. You characterize them as these two average guys who have been acting tough for who knows how many years, and then bam, Nathan just threw them in one of the most awkward situations I've ever seen! Well, at least Joey thought of a way to make it less awkward.
Done very nicely. Be proud of yourself.
3/28/2008 c1 4vaudeville summers
Very nicely wriiten and downright adorable. I wish there were more descriptions of the characters, but I really found this piece wonderful.
((favorited))
~DeAnna
4vaudeville summersVery nicely wriiten and downright adorable. I wish there were more descriptions of the characters, but I really found this piece wonderful.
((favorited))
~DeAnna