for the day is dying11/28/2008 c1 
5quicktart
Hmm... Most people would say that you would need every “i” capitalized and the first word of every line (of every stanza) would need to be capitalized, but I honestly like the effect it makes for this certain piece. No one could do this exact thing you've done and have gotten away with it. I saw whispers and such because of the way you've done this, and I could feel the emotion. No one's ever been able to get me to see and feel exactly like this before.
~Rébecca
5quicktartHmm... Most people would say that you would need every “i” capitalized and the first word of every line (of every stanza) would need to be capitalized, but I honestly like the effect it makes for this certain piece. No one could do this exact thing you've done and have gotten away with it. I saw whispers and such because of the way you've done this, and I could feel the emotion. No one's ever been able to get me to see and feel exactly like this before.
~Rébecca