
7/4/2008 c1
10TwilightButterfly
I read this the other day. I think the title was different though, and you've changed a few lines. As always, I like the last lines. You have a thing with last lines.

I read this the other day. I think the title was different though, and you've changed a few lines. As always, I like the last lines. You have a thing with last lines.
3/29/2008 c1
32Dreaming Chica
Beautifully written! I love the flow of this poem! Just one thing, double check your spelling ok? there are a couple small things! nothing big, I do it all time!
♥ Dreaming Chica ♥

Beautifully written! I love the flow of this poem! Just one thing, double check your spelling ok? there are a couple small things! nothing big, I do it all time!
♥ Dreaming Chica ♥